Updated evaluation (For Content Page)

Here is an updated version of my evaluation, however only for my contents page and the changes that I have made, if you wish to see my full evaluation then click here.

Before and After

Contents Page Resit

In order to improve my grade, I have redone the contents page to my music magazine, as I believed that this is the weakest of my coursework and had clear room for improvement, here is the original contents page against my newer contents page.