Updated evaluation (For Content Page)

Here is an updated version of my evaluation, however only for my contents page and the changes that I have made, if you wish to see my full evaluation then click here.

Before and After

Contents Page Resit

In order to improve my grade, I have redone the contents page to my music magazine, as I believed that this is the weakest of my coursework and had clear room for improvement, here is the original contents page against my newer contents page.

Media Evaluation

Final Magazine Designs

 

Double Page Final Draft

This is the only one that i actually worked hard on and i'm quite happy with how it turned out, but i do see room for improvment which no matter how much i try, it never works. Mostly to do with the text, it looks really cramped and keeps going over white backgrounds making it difficult to read but it is the best i can do with it no matter how hard i work on it so this is the best i can do. Besides it is quite a minor flaw in my opinion.

Double Page Draft #2

This is my 2nd draft, although i do think this is much better than my first one, i still think it's pretty crap, the writting is practically unreadable here and the picture is just me with a filter put over it.